I LOVE[POEM]

Posted on May 12, 2008 by nanabby

I love the way you look at me your eyes so bright and blue i love the way you kiss me your lips so soft and smooth. I love the way you make me so happy and the way you show you care, i love the way you say i love you and the ways your always there. I love the way you touch me always sending chills down my spine. I love the way you are with me and im glad that you are mine

By. Alyssa

S: Love and Emotions

O: A woman named Alyssa who is in love because of her boyfriend/husband/bestfriends’s actions towards her.

A: My readers/Her Lover

P: To let the person know how she feels

S: A young woman named Alyssa

TONE: A loved and Happy tone

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6 Responses

  1. evewray, on May 13th, 2008 at 12:33 am Said:

    Hi Tiana,

    I really liked your poem it was very touchy and beautiful.
    i liked what the message about the poem wanted us to know.

    from: Eve Wray

  3. evewray, on May 15th, 2008 at 4:09 am Said:

    i really like the poem Tiana
    from Eve Wray

  4. Breana, on May 16th, 2008 at 4:42 am Said:

    That’s a beautiful poem. Us girls need to stick together and we can’t let guys get in our ways of sucssess. his poem is one of those love poems girls tend to write when we are in love.As for your “sapstone it can be more specific.It dose answer the puestions,but maybe add more details.

  5. msmatzkesenglishclass, on May 27th, 2008 at 10:01 pm Said:

    Where is Eve’s comment?

  6. Ms. Matzke, on May 28th, 2008 at 12:07 am Said:

    I absolutely LOVE the picture you used for his poem! Where did you find it? You need to provide a link if it was taken from someone’s site–otherwise it is plagiarism. I think it works for your poem definitely.

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